Comments for Jodi Hanson's Weblog http://jhanson.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Sat, 17 May 2008 19:44:00 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=MU Comment on Draft Thesis Statement by nursepursuer7 http://jhanson.wordpress.com/2008/03/25/draft-thesis-statement/#comment-4 nursepursuer7 Wed, 26 Mar 2008 11:39:42 +0000 http://jhanson.wordpress.com/?p=15#comment-4 The writer starts off by talking about personality changes during adulthood. Therefore, her paper is going to show this change by providing examples or giving information of an individual(s) their personality when they were younger and what it is now as an adult. Following this she supports this by stating this change occur because of self-satisfication with an individual life. Therefore, the writer will provide examples or give information of an individual personality change because of their life is good. The writer starts off by talking about personality changes during adulthood. Therefore, her paper is going to show this change by providing examples or giving information of an individual(s) their personality when they were younger and what it is now as an adult. Following this she supports this by stating this change occur because of self-satisfication with an individual life. Therefore, the writer will provide examples or give information of an individual personality change because of their life is good.

]]> Comment on Draft Thesis Statement by Kim Shupert http://jhanson.wordpress.com/2008/03/25/draft-thesis-statement/#comment-3 Kim Shupert Wed, 26 Mar 2008 11:28:42 +0000 http://jhanson.wordpress.com/?p=15#comment-3 What I think your abstract will look like. (It seems similar to mine!) In this paper a person will learn about the different stages a persons personality goes through in order to develop. It will explain how these changes can be strongly influenced by the person's everyday life and even his or her past. It will explain different situations that can affect a personality and the outcome of the situation. Also it will explain how a person's satisfaction with his or her self matters when it comes to their personality. This paper will give statistics on self-satisfaction and the differences in personalities. What I think your abstract will look like. (It seems similar to mine!)

In this paper a person will learn about the different stages a persons personality goes through in order to develop. It will explain how these changes can be strongly influenced by the person’s everyday life and even his or her past. It will explain different situations that can affect a personality and the outcome of the situation. Also it will explain how a person’s satisfaction with his or her self matters when it comes to their personality. This paper will give statistics on self-satisfaction and the differences in personalities.

]]> Comment on Draft Thesis Statement by David Joy http://jhanson.wordpress.com/2008/03/25/draft-thesis-statement/#comment-2 David Joy Wed, 26 Mar 2008 11:14:18 +0000 http://jhanson.wordpress.com/?p=15#comment-2 Personality changes that occur during adulthood are strongly influenced by the overall self-satisfaction with one’s entire life. Ups and downs in a persons life create a pattern of responses to which they will follow the rest of their lives. Self-satisfaction can also be seen as self-confidence which starts at a young age and continues throughout most of a persons life. Self-satisfaction is easily influenced through positive and negative experiences during a life span. Satisfaction has a differnt defintion to everybody and whether or not they are satisfied with their life is really a matter of personal goals they have set for themselves. Personality changes that occur during adulthood are strongly influenced by the overall self-satisfaction with one’s entire life. Ups and downs in a persons life create a pattern of responses to which they will follow the rest of their lives. Self-satisfaction can also be seen as self-confidence which starts at a young age and continues throughout most of a persons life. Self-satisfaction is easily influenced through positive and negative experiences during a life span. Satisfaction has a differnt defintion to everybody and whether or not they are satisfied with their life is really a matter of personal goals they have set for themselves.

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